From Create Your Own Story

I love what you have done. If I were to review it, I'd give it ★★★★☆ (That's 4 stars, if you can't tell). The fact you are adding chapters makes this feel a bit more sophisticated than other stories. And the fact that there are little red links until the story ends as a work in progress helps to make that better. Just fill up those red links, and keep the Remember Bonuses! --Magikarp7297 06:34, 7 July 2018 (UTC)

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