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Dood can I ask something? I need you to please help me. Seriously and do you have a place that we can talk privately.
Yours, Michael. hehe really put that to help me(PLS SERSLY AND ALSO I WONT BE HOME TOMORROW SO I CANT REPLY BUT I WILL REPLY AS SOON AS I GET HOME Thanks) -- User:Michaeltamayo96
Dude I just read the tutorial and im new so dont expect me to write such many branches. --Michaeltamayo96
Please check Special:Contributions/Njrsgg. I have edited one of the stories that was posted that contained "under age vagina", but looking through many of his posts, it is still pretty obvious, even though I removed mention of the underage and 4th grade" and that kind of thing. I have also warned him. But, I think you may still want to look through his pages to decide what may be too close to the editthis ban on content. --Dirty Me 02:41, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
*Sniff* You haven't given me any options for The Exhibitionist. You should be able to give me great options. I will write the story, just want creative ways to show myself off xD --Dirty Me 09:17, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
It will be filled out over time as I come up with more ideas for the story. Unfortunately, I tend to take my time with writing so It'll mostly come out in bits and pieces. --User:Fredhot16 12:03, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
What the hell is "shotgun-wielding" supposed to mean? Here's what I mean: "Miss Natsume. Shotgun wielding teacher. Long dark purple hair, matching eyes. 5'8. C Cup." Really, what is it supposed to mean? Other then the obvious denotation but I haven't seen a anime where teachers are allowed to bring firearms to school and I get the feeling that it's supposed to be related to her personality.--User:Fredhot16 10:42, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)
Hell yeah! I've discovered TV Tropes before I found this website. I even have my own troper profile:Fredhot16.--User:Fredhot16 10:32, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)
Is it O.K to find empty discussion pages and put in a trope list of what tropes I think fits the page's content?--User:Fredhot16 07:53, 15 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)
Added a Rules page and linked it on the front page. I guess it is strange to tell them to follow the rules, and have no rules page, so... Anyways, I will let you edit it if you feel the need, add, subtract, modify, etc. --Dirty Me 02:03, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
Hey Platypus, it's User:Vgybhu. You gave me some helpful formatting advice for my Monster Girl Adventure story, but its in such an early state its not even playable. I guess I just wanted to say 'message received' and ask for any advice on how to keep my story progressing but allow me to write in 20 mins bursts. I'll keep the update log and option descriptions labeled for now with % complete, although I was hoping to write my story in chunks with one encounter for each character/start point (So it'll take awhile before there is actually a path to play into).
I formatted a couple links on the main page to try to help them stand out. I did in a single edit, so it can be easily reverted if you do not like. Maybe someone can take my idea and make it look better, I just made them look like buttons xD Anyways, if you do not like, please feel free to revert, and I won't feel bad. If anyone does like, well, perhaps someone else can modify the template to make it look better. It was actually a test template I was working on to try to make the index's themselves look better, but I could not get them to look right. --Dirty Me 05:53, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
I think I meant it to be the present case they were currently having sex? I am not really sure, but I will check later because I have things to do. I though I wrote in present tense cause I did not really check over my work though.User:GirlOnGirlFan!
Um, oops, I kind of got them mixed up its been a while since I wrote something. Did you edit it if not I will. And next time I will check my work more thoroughly. User:GirlOnGirlFan!
Sorry, think I overwhelmed the poor guy :o I was trying to help, not intimidate xD (hint check histories...)
Am I really that intimidating? I want others to tell me what I am doing wrong in my writing, so I thought it would help...--Dirty Me 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
You are not replying, so I will write one page and if you do not like it simply delete it. From GirlOnGirlFan! to Platypus.
I read your stories Smutty Sex Romp and Rampage, I must say your writing is truly marvelous. To be honest, I only created this account to tell you that because I am no easy person to please, In fact I am quite finicky in writing and reading other peoples stories, others work usually disappoints me and one request. The request is may I write some pages in your stories? As a huge fan of your work it would be such an honor for you to let me contribute to your superb stories! I would only write one page for a demo of my skills and you tell me if you want me to continue contributing or not. From GirlOnGirlFan! to Platypus.
Hi Platypus, it's Whining Winnie. The reason I haven't been able to chat is because you've done something to like this page, so when on my DSi (I mostly use the internet browser on that) i try to send you messages about stuff, it won't let me type, similar to the problem user AllyG was having. Did you like change like the format or anything on this page? Also is anybody working on Star Wars: The Complete Erotic Saga?? Thanks, Whining Winnie Happy Easter Everyone!
The reason is why I do not have the grammatical skills is because I did not try at the time it was late and I got lazy but I wanted it to continue the story because its good and I hate cliff hangers, and plus I thought the rules of this site say your allowed I did not know. User:H0rniWr1t3r
If you replied to my comment un ban H0rniWr1t3r and I will talk to you there instead of changing my public ip address, FYI I will not ever again write in your stories. I forgot the password of LookIdidNotMean2VandalismIamNewRemember either that or you deleted it! User:H0rniWr1t3r
Sorry if this is vandalism but I wanted you too see what I go through to understand why I am so "immature" . I changed the page because it was a joke only meant for me to see to cope with the stress and pain in my life that's why I deleted it. You really think someone like me has it easy I struggle with bipolar, severe borderline personality disorder,asd,ocd,schizophrenia,pstd,anxiety, depression, multiple personality disorder, grew up in another country and had to switch everything, got kicked out of the house when I was 18 cause I am bisexual, Not to mention I been abused as a child and I am studying penetration testing and I cannot screw up because I am trying to get a job my life is not easy and now I am thinking of committing suicide thanks to you because you crushed my hobby of writing I know I suck but I can at least pretend I am worth something. I think I am strong and continuing to grow do to what I go through! Its funny I called you a noob in IT but really I think I am the noob :( I guess I am not due to the fact my team says I am the best one there but yeah fucking right. The fact I am still standing loads of medication which is making me feel numb and queasy due to the crap side effects.User:H0rniWr1t3r
I don't know what I did wrong how did I do vandalism, I was just trying to comment you please don't ban me for this. I am new and just learning the ways of this site so please tell me how to do it the proper way. User:H0rniWr1t3r
Its me H0rniWr1t3r look I'm sorry about telling you to mind your own business, but I found your comment very rude and I was emotionally crushed than you would delete my pages because you think I am a bad writer and yet you allow other people to edit? so can we please talk this out though email or facebook or something this chat room sucks in my opinion. User:H0rniWr1t3r
I am terribly sorry to hear that D: I hope you have a fast recovery though, and good to know that you are at least okay, well, as okay as someone can be after surgery... --Dirty Me 18:13, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
o.O What happened? --Dirty Me 18:08, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
When you come back, you might want to check Special:Contributions/Darth_nox. I am not blanking his pages, just trying to fix them, but some of the stuff he is writing... --Dirty Me 03:52, 26 March 2016 (UTC)
Sooooo...I got Teejay to leave me options. When is platy going to leave me some? --Dirty Me 03:56, 18 March 2016 (UTC)
lol, feel free to give him warning 2...I have already warned him about categories, then I gave him a non-warn2 warning before he got the second warning. Seems he isn't learning his lesson :o --Dirty Me 10:05, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
Note for you, some idiot wiped the adult index, and I cannot figure out how to restore because of "too many conflicting changes"...only thing I can see is recreating the entire thing...which would be a pain...I will leave it up to you to see if you can figure out how to fix. --Dirty Me 13:28, 11 March 2016 (UTC)
Please do not tell me what I can and can't edit, you should just mind your own goddamn business! I know I am not experienced in English its my second language. So can you please keep to your self. H0rniWr1t3r
Just wanted to say thanks for the reminder with category pages! Sorry that I caused the trouble. LilBitOfSpace
Just wanted to experiment! Did you like the rest of the story? Whining Winnie
Well if your not happy with that bit, I'll edit it out!......:-( Whining Winnie
It's not letting me add external links. I try to, then the page reloads asking me to enter a captcha. I do that and then a page pops up saying I can only submit one page with an external link every 20 minutes. Only I wasn't able to submit any. Any suggestions? Gr1mm 11:13 Central Time 1/15/2016
Don't forget that CLM is my first story. Of course it's going to have some issues and stuff. But practice makes perfect! Also I`ve added a few more pages and the reason I haven't been on was because I went to my friends funeral. He died in a car crash. RIP Jacob Pierre 1989-2016
Could you move CLM to the Adult Stories section? It's now got sex in it so I thought it should be moved to Adult. And is it rude that the druglord in my story is named El Faggetito? Whining Winnie 20/1/16 21:37 (AEST)
Damn. Well thanks for the reply anyway, though. Gr1mm 1:35 Central Time 1/21/2016
Thank you for maintaining the organization of the Force Awakens page as we get some new people writing. Cheers! - CodeSoldier
Hey, is it possible to have rate limits removed? I believe that is what they are referred to as. I just want to know if it's somehow possible to be verified or something such and remove the time limits. I.e. the 2 second un-cached page limit, the 60(?) page visit limit, the 20 minute page with a link limit. Thanks for your help. CodeSoldier 31/01/16
Hey, you left a message on my discussion page that my dialogue's punctuation and grammar is bad and I shouldn't post on your stories because of a page that I made on one of your stories, but the grammar seems fine to me and all you did was add a comma and change some wording around. So am I allowed to add pages to your story or should I not edit that story anymore? Fort 05/02/16
Relax… All I did was ask why you thought my grammar was bad because when I checked the edit, I only saw one punctuation edit and that didn’t seem to be enough to warrant your complaint that my pages were bad. When I looked again, I saw that there were three grammar edits, so I retracted my statement. I don’t quite understand your hostility towards a first-time editor, but I’ll remove my pages posthaste from your story Smutty Sex Romp as my writing is not good enough for your standards. I readded my previous comment for posterity's sake. --Fort 5 February 2016
I apologize for my "obsession with colons" when it comes to dialogue - I've been told my English grammar is rather good for a non-native speaker, but apparently that's one bad habit that's slipped through so far. Will definitely try to do better. - ETA later same day: Thanks. Hopefully you won't find as many wrong colons from now on... Shirasade 20/02/16
Really sorry, but I screwed up a link and accidentally created two identical pages with different titles. There is one page with no link to it and I can't see how to redirect or delete it. Apologies once again. Slk350 23/02/16
Thank you ever so much for fixing the problem so quickly. Slk350 24/02/16
I actually meant grammar sergeant about the intimidating xD For the other guy, he will probably be back on his next up swing. I am familiar many of his conditions. Honestly, nothing anyone here can do for him. Anyways, I mean check grammar sergeant's large deletions when I had a large addition on talk pages (His and a specific story talk page) and you will see why I ask if I was intimidating. --Dirty Me 02:46, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Sorry to bother you about this and I apologize in advance if I sound too critical but I'm actually kinda curious about the "Feel her up for real since she's already slapped you" choice in "Darkness". I mean, why would someone choose to deliberately cop a feel on their sister in the middle of a mysterious blackout after they had found a note imploring them to stay? Also, why was there a katana or steel thing in the room where the protagonist was and why did you include the "I'm Your Brother" choice if the protagonist was a girl? It felt like a place where the reader could decide on the protagonist's gender even if it was a bit late. Sorry if this sounds too critical. - Fredhot16
I'm going to finish the above section in "Idea Pitches" in time. I've got projects to do. Sorry for delay. --User:Fredhot16 09:12, 10 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)
Woah. You actually know the nickname of the Venture. Well, one. The nickname in the core rulebook in the First Edition is "Lords". It's still cool, though. Thanks for the advice. I've got a question, though: how do you the copyright since I'm planning on copying the short descriptions of the clans from one of the pdfs of Vampire? Edit: I've found "Aristocrats" to be used in one of the NWOD Vampire novels so...you win this round. --User:Fredhot16 09:15, 11 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)
You know what? I've finally decided about what to do that "feeling up" choice in "Darkness". Fuck it. FUCK. IT. Not only is the choice out of place, there is nothing that would suggest that the protagonist, Jenny, has any feelings or thoughts that would suggest she would do such a thing. And yes, I've read your note about how how choices don't need to seem logical but this is, simply put, not a good choice. Gepetto chose that choice because it was a fairy tale and illogical choices are a staple in that sort of thing. Thing is, I'm not against illogical choices. I'm not against unreasonable choices. Hell, I'm not even against stupid choices. I'm against unrealistic choices. I'm against a choice that does nothing to advance the story or even make an attempt to do so. So fuck that choice. As of now, I'm going to get rid of it when I've got the time. --User:Fredhot16 08:26, 18 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)
So to answer your question aboutMy Little Pony: Choose Your Own Adventure (yeah, it was over a year ago but...) anyway, Here's a short description of the story: it's basically a dating sim. Of a sort. I'm only calling a "dating sim: because, well, I've realized that if I were to put a genre into it, "dating sim" would be the closest one thought "slice of life" is a better description. If you have the patience to listen to me ramble on about what it's supposed to be, let me know.--User:Fredhot16 16:04, 19 March 2016 (Louisiana Time)
I thought I'd ask an experienced user (I am very new) is it worth trying to resurrect/clean up a cluttered and/or messy story started by someone else. I'm having fun editing the Pokesex story but I'm more than a little put off by the lack of focus some of the things people added before I got there (Some joker added a shemale option at the beginning that had nothing to it and although there are some worthwhile ideas there are way too many categories and sub divisions) So the story is looking a little neglected but I quite like the set up. I'm new to the site so please excuse me if I get something wrong. (Oh by the way, is there a way to watch an entire branch of a story for edits?) --Helpless Newbie 8 April 2016
Yes, I do. However, I'm to categorize them later. Let's be honest: I am a very patchy writer. Also, I apologize for the "Darkness" choices. Let me ask: did you start the story? If so, can you please tell me what the story is supposed to be? Just want to know so i can be sure of what type of stuff to put in the story.--User:Fredhot16 08:37, 08 April 2016 (Louisiana Time)
Thanks for the help with the previous thing. Unfortunately I've come back with another question; Is there a way to outright delete a page? I want to delete a series of pages that a user (Who was banned some time ago) added because they are stupid for the sake of being stupid. If that's impossible or against the rules I'll work around it but it would be helpful if I had the option --Helpless Newbie 10 April 2016
Hi, you deleted my page because you said it had already been created and deleted, when it was originally created earlier today I accidentally started making it on my home page because I was confused about how to go about it, but I was warned about having an unsorted story so I deleted all of it and put it in the mature section like I was supposed to originally. I'm very new to this site and was just confused. The original link doesn't exist anymore- at least I don't think it does. So I'm going to put my story back on there, because there's no need to rewrite something when you just put it in the wrong spot. Thank you for deleting though. --QueenPrisme 7:43pm April 13, 2016
Hey would it be kosher to set up the category page for someone else's story just out of the blue or should I ask them first? -- In The Worst Ways 1:44am April 16, 2016
Is there a way to make the page titles shorter, the ones at the top of the webpage not the address of the page (Apart from making the address shorter) I want to keep things neat and make it easy for people to find the beginning and stuff but the length for some of the pages is getting silly. If there isn't thats fine but I just wanted to know if I had the option. --Hellspawn 19 April 2016
Would you happen to be able to tell me if Leaving is past the point of me worrying about the pit or not? I know it takes a while to get to that point, but we may be ending up on the sidewalk soon, and I'm just worried it'll fall of the bottom if I can't get back online for a long time. -- In The Worst Ways 12:49pm 4/26/16 (Eastern Standard Time)